Friday, September 10, 2010

Relative Wind

Relative Wind by Mac214
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5558729/1/Relative_Wind
Summary: The Mougar cometh! A steamy day at the drop zone turns into more than Bella bargains for when she meets her new roommate's father. A tale of May-December relationships, father-daughter dynamics, and the happiest hooha in Philadelphia. Very citrusy. AH.

Relative Wind features an older Edward (45) and a young Bella (25). Bella and Edward encounter each other while skydiving. He is her tandem instructor and her quickie for the day. Later, Bella discovers her new roommate Alice is Edward's daughter and chaos ensues as he pursues her. I was freaked out by this premise but Edward's youthful exuberance and Bella's maturity make it work. Their relationship is so silly. They give great banter and there are some tastefully written yet hot lemons in this story. Alice's spoiled brat behavior is hysterical in this story as she works at tearing Bella down. I would read this one again as the relationship between Bella and Edward was really well developed and so humorous and hot at the same time. The author uses several POV's and keeps things moving at a quick pace.

Team Jacob safe as he doesn't exist.

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